This poem is an excerpt from the original free write of what eventually became "Children Part 2" which is available in the archives...for that larger version it felt necessary to cut this stuff, however it's not to bad on its own...highlighting thus the tensions of editing.

spinning in dark

all three

leave this room

live their lives

forget or not

and fight

battles, make moves

as sinders, blown

by heat out of the barrel

fire to flutter down onto Bingo’s

jeans ‘ooch ooch ooch’

drinking jungle joose

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