This poem is an excerpt from the original free write of what eventually became "Children Part 2" which is available in the archives...for that larger version it felt necessary to cut this stuff, however it's not to bad on its own...highlighting thus the tensions of editing.
spinning in dark
all three
leave this room
live their lives
forget or not
and fight
battles, make moves
as sinders, blown
by heat out of the barrel
fire to flutter down onto Bingo’s
jeans ‘ooch ooch ooch’
drinking jungle joose
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